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it was raining hard as you stood on the battlefield your clothes wet and covered in a mixture of blood and mud. You stood looking at the bodies of the the men
who were willing to give their lives for freedom and the ones who want to steal it from them.

you kept the fact that you were a woman hidden only one man knew and he was your bestfriend since forever and the leader of the army . He didnt want you to
join the war but you refused to back down against england.

you wanted freedom and were willing to kill or be killed for it.

you stood by the few soliers who survived so far you watched and waited
for the enemy to strike they never did, for arthur was all alone.
is knees on the ground cradling his face in his hands

"arthur, you used to be so big" alfred said as a single tear rolled
down his cheek from the distance you saw a red figure

hidin among the trees it pointed something aiming toward


you ran as fast as your sore legs could carry you "ALFRED!!!"  
you leaped in front of the american. A loud bang was heard.

"_____!!!!!" you fell to the ground your body slowly numbing barley able to move.

"__-____!!! n-no please stay with me!!" alfred held your head as you lay on the ground "please!!!! you cant leave i-i love you!!!"

tears where pouring from alfreds eyes as yours became dull

"im so sorry i was such a coward i-i im sorry i couldnt tell you sooner"

"i-i love y-you too....alfred" "____ come on please you have to live!!!"

you reachedyour hand up and cupped his cheek he held your hand and rubbed his
cheek against it.

"P-please dont cry alfred i-im happy that you loved me e-even f-for a little while im just sorry i wont be there for you" tears brimmed you eyesthreatining to fall

"p-please _____ d-dont say that your gonna live _____, p-please say it'll be alright"

"d-dont cry alfie b-be happy b-because of you though m-m-my l-live was sho-short you made it the happiest years of my l-life j-just promise me alfred th-that you'll be happy"

the world was gooing fuzzy and your eyelids felt heavy you heard the fading cries of the man you loved.



"______ stay with me please!!!"

as your heart beat quickly fading your breath's were short your last words, no louder than a whisper

                                                 "god bless america"
so sad :iconcryforeverplz: and short sorry if there are grammar errors ENJOY!!!! (or not) itwould have been longer but school is sucking the creativity out of me :iconangryfaceplz: I HATE SCHOOL!!!!!!!!!

I don't own Hetalia but

:iconsexyamericaplz: owns you Oooooohhh yeah!!!!
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KirbyAnimeB4 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Not bad. I'll say I was almost touched, I just noticed a few missing comma's... The only errors I felt were that it just feels kind of rushed, and my death didn't feel like I was dying... I mean, the stuttering was good, but again, it was rushed. More comma's mean more pauses and I feel like that would have improved it a bit more. Good story, though, I definetly liked it a whole bunch! *Two thumbs up!*

Dogshampoo24 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
Mah feels
jjgirl99 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
th-this happened in the m-mansion *sniff* thanks to :iconjjgirl99:

((i said i was sorry!!!))
allieallred Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
y-you . . . KILLED MEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! well that sucks but it was a good story so. . . GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 loved it
DoushinjiGeek Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Alphonsie Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Artist
vocaloidcat456 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
im crying right now
XDemon-WolfX Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
animenerd2001 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconruncryplz: :nuu: this story is so sad....

:iconyunoplz: Story, Y U SO SAD?!?

this is great keep the stories going ^^
animenerd2001 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:nuu: Why did the icon turn out like that?!? :iconshockplz:
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