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it was raining hard as you stood on the battlefield your clothes wet and covered in a mixture of blood and mud. You stood looking at the bodies of the the men
who were willing to give their lives for freedom and the ones who want to steal it from them.

you kept the fact that you were a woman hidden only one man knew and he was your bestfriend since forever and the leader of the army . He didnt want you to
join the war but you refused to back down against england.

you wanted freedom and were willing to kill or be killed for it.

you stood by the few soliers who survived so far you watched and waited
for the enemy to strike they never did, for arthur was all alone.
is knees on the ground cradling his face in his hands


"arthur, you used to be so big" alfred said as a single tear rolled
down his cheek from the distance you saw a red figure

hidin among the trees it pointed something aiming toward

'alfred'

you ran as fast as your sore legs could carry you "ALFRED!!!"  
you leaped in front of the american. A loud bang was heard.

"_____!!!!!" you fell to the ground your body slowly numbing barley able to move.

"__-____!!! n-no please stay with me!!" alfred held your head as you lay on the ground "please!!!! you cant leave i-i love you!!!"

tears where pouring from alfreds eyes as yours became dull

"im so sorry i was such a coward i-i im sorry i couldnt tell you sooner"

"i-i love y-you too....alfred" "____ come on please you have to live!!!"

you reachedyour hand up and cupped his cheek he held your hand and rubbed his
cheek against it.

"P-please dont cry alfred i-im happy that you loved me e-even f-for a little while im just sorry i wont be there for you" tears brimmed you eyesthreatining to fall

"p-please _____ d-dont say that your gonna live _____, p-please say it'll be alright"

"d-dont cry alfie b-be happy b-because of you though m-m-my l-live was sho-short you made it the happiest years of my l-life j-just promise me alfred th-that you'll be happy"

the world was gooing fuzzy and your eyelids felt heavy you heard the fading cries of the man you loved.

"______!?!?!"

"______!!!!"

"______ stay with me please!!!"

as your heart beat quickly fading your breath's were short your last words, no louder than a whisper

                                                 "god bless america"
so sad :iconcryforeverplz: and short sorry if there are grammar errors ENJOY!!!! (or not) itwould have been longer but school is sucking the creativity out of me :iconangryfaceplz: I HATE SCHOOL!!!!!!!!!

I don't own Hetalia but

:iconsexyamericaplz: owns you Oooooohhh yeah!!!!
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KirbyAnimeB4 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Not bad. I'll say I was almost touched, I just noticed a few missing comma's... The only errors I felt were that it just feels kind of rushed, and my death didn't feel like I was dying... I mean, the stuttering was good, but again, it was rushed. More comma's mean more pauses and I feel like that would have improved it a bit more. Good story, though, I definetly liked it a whole bunch! *Two thumbs up!*

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Dogshampoo24 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
Mah feels
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jjgirl99 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
th-this happened in the m-mansion *sniff* thanks to :iconjjgirl99:

((i said i was sorry!!!))
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allieallred Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
y-you . . . KILLED MEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! well that sucks but it was a good story so. . . GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 loved it
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DoushinjiGeek Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcrycryplz:
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:iconalphonsie:
Alphonsie Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Artist
:cries:
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vocaloidcat456 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
im crying right now
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XDemon-WolfX Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
;-; NUUUU MY EYES!! FLOOD!!
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:iconanimenerd2001:
animenerd2001 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconruncryplz: :nuu: this story is so sad....

:iconyunoplz: Story, Y U SO SAD?!?

this is great keep the stories going ^^
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animenerd2001 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:nuu: Why did the icon turn out like that?!? :iconshockplz:
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SecretlySpain Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013   Writer
:iconemocornertamakiplz: So SAD!!!!!! But so adorable! *emotions are conflicted*
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pinkstar144 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*wipes tears with tissue and cuddles America Mochi*..... OwO

S-Such a great story.... I luv it ^^

Keep up the good work~

*huggles America mochi to death* X3
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yumikoito Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Student General Artist
OMG! This is so touching though it's really short. D: i love your use of words and your grammar to me is fine except for some capitals. You should totally write another x Reader story, I love them. :3

I HATE SCHOOL TOO!!!!!
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kwajchick Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:iconamericawhyplz:

Overused icon, but yes. :D
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:iconlittlegaywolf:
LittleGayWolf Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha it's okey I use it a lot too :iconamericawhyplz: lol
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:iconkwajchick:
kwajchick Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
It's cute >w<
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:iconyuukidesune:
YuukiDesuNe Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
D: I know everyone's using this icon, but :iconamericawhyplz:
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FMAandKHfangirl Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Student Filmographer
:iconcraiplz:NEEEEEEEEH!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconamekumori:
AmeKumori Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Student Writer
I'm tearing up right now! This is so good! If I were to die tomorrow I'd want to do it knowing I saved my friend!
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
WAAH! IT'S SO SAD! but it's good. :)
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Ask-2p-Mat Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
:iconcryforeverplz: y-you know I-I didn't n-need that happyness.....but this story I love it *clicks add to favorites*
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aphgurl01 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
; ______ ; i am so sad right now
FRIGGIN RED COATSSSSSSSSSSS
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102AnimeLover102 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Every time I read a sad story/video I ended up murmuring saying 'Don't cry you bloody git it's just a story/video!' And this story made me cry for 2 minutes :iconamericawhyplz:
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Rina-san28 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very powerful ending! Nice job!
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LuCynthiaRitonia Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Im crying behind the power and emotion behind those words "God Bless America!" ...*mumbles to self* shit... stop crying before someone sees you... This is the first x reader thing i have ever read :D it is awesome I loved it and i am not crying :iconpokerfacememeplz: :iconthinksplz: Hope no one notices....
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:iconlittlegaywolf:
LittleGayWolf Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconamericawhyplz: THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!
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LuCynthiaRitonia Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconchibiamericaplz: YW! :D
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yumi-bomi Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012   Traditional Artist
Awwww amazing I cried :(
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51Sonic Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
It's so good, but sad :iconamericawhyplz:
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cybertrix Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
please write more! do like a second part or something!
by the way do you think it's strange that i used an alias for me while reading it? 0-0
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:iconlittlegaywolf:
LittleGayWolf Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
But you died lol
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:iconcybertrix:
cybertrix Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ermmm... i don't know change it so you wake up in a hospital barely alive or something!... sorry i'm fangirling...
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:iconlittlegaywolf:
LittleGayWolf Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nah it's cool i totally get it but im afraid its over :iconcryforeverplz: I KIND OF WANTED IT TO CONTINUE TO!!!!!!!!!
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cybertrix Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! :iconsadenglandplz: :iconsadamericaplz: :iconsaditalyplz:
ok~... XC
but seriously, i liked the story and i don't usually read readerXhetalia stuff X)
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:iconlittlegaywolf:
LittleGayWolf Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconamericawhyplz: THAT MEANS SO MUCH TO ME!!!!!!
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cybertrix Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you are welcome!!!! and before you leave~
you bloody git!... giving me all these feels! :cries:
haha it's funny how i'm British but love Alfred! <3
I NEED YOU TO WRITE MORE!!... sorry, it's late and i've been fangirling for ages...
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:iconlittlegaywolf:
LittleGayWolf Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahaha lol
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threepinkdoors Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You... You just made me the happiest woman on earth i know it sound wrong but this is exactly the way I want to go.

It still kind of bothers me that a lot of people don't know how blessed they are to live in this country. They worry about the economy, whatever, and they take their freedom for granted because they never picked up a rifle and killed someone in order to gain that freedom. Its like your dad is the richest man on earth and he gives you all his money as inheritance and you blow it because you didn't work hard for that money.

Idk about anyone else, but if I don't die defending my country, i don't think i could live with myself in the afterlife knowing i could have done something to make this nation a better place.

Thats all i had to say. Sorry for ranting XD
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:iconlittlegaywolf:
LittleGayWolf Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nah it's cool your comment touched me so :iconcryforeverplz: SO TRUE!!!!!!
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threepinkdoors Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yes! someone understands! :huggle:
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KatariinaP Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
; ~ ;
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RynWolf Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
:iconlaztcryplz: it was really good...
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RynWolf Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
:iconlazycryplz:
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Giro-Natsu-4ever Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconthefeelsplz:
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DerpyKia Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconcraiplz: n-no nooooo D: :icongrinfaceplz::iconknifeplz: i'll go kill england now xD
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LittleGayWolf Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconamericawhyplz: WHY ENGLAND WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!
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